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-|Amne sui jata pahela, traata aanajani aashish de;
+|Amne sui jata pahela, traata saanjani aashish de;
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-|Aasapaas phare bhay karnaara, nashana uude tir adhik;
+|Aasapaas phare bhay karnaara, naashana uude tir adhik;
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-|Raat che ghor tatha andhaari, to pan tane thanke nahi;
+|Raat che ghor tatha andhaari, to pan tane dhanke nahi;
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-|Jyaa jyaa rahe che praja taari, nit che choksi nahi.
+|Jyaa jyaa rahe che praja taari, nit che tari choksi tahin.
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-|Aaj raat aashavant jagat tyaagi, uungiae motani kabaramaay;
+|Aaj raat naashavant jagat tyaagi, ungihae motani kabaramaay;
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-|To sawaare swarge jaagi, ame paamiae taj akshay.
+|To sawaare swarge jaagi, ame paamiae tej akshay.
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